An empty station. by Bianca Doe

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Ten feet away, a man squats on his haunches & fumbles through his zippered jeans. Seconds later, a pressured stream begins to creep my way. Drawing my knees up, curling in on myself, I shuddered. Resigned, I thought, "This train's never coming."

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